Monday, October 8, 2018

Closets Comments

Rating: 5.0

Door hinges pry on my secrets.
My secrets boxed in like buried treasures.
Treasure's Island gems, warrant keys to unlock private affairs.
Privates affairs kept in closets; in boxes, behind those hinges, buckling under my fiery.
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Bree Z Love
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 October 2018

Such a well crafted chain verse.....10++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

Secrets are boxed in treasured mind but door can open these. A passionate mind feels everything. An amazing poem is very cleverly and brilliantly penned...10

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

Chicago, Illinois
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