Closer Comments

Rohit, I am spellbound by the simple langauage. Any one with little knowledge of English will understand your creativity and the emotions behind it. I am reading all your poems one by one you deserve 10+

‘Making this night worth remember Sharing love with total surrender.’ ~ Wow…the take off is jocund …I hope poet like you will keep up Closer always never make it ‘Closure’…. Enjoyed the vibe in full length… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Let's come closer one more time Closer enough to make this fine, Making this night worth remember Sharing love with total surrender...... closeness removes many misgivings....10

very expressive..nicely done

what a start and proper flow........ i got in love with this poem of yours......... Really touched my deep core.............

OH it touched me keep writing...

This poem write felt so warm, encompassing and altogether right! Loved it! ; D

I like the repetitive effect created by the similarities and subtle differences of the first and last stanzas. Good job!