Closed Path Comments

A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

You have described Life well in a few sentences. Things change; You never how things can change, change for the better only if look for it. Well published.

a very good attitude in this poem...go forth for the beauty

hello friend! ! ! ' When my old tracks Had gone with wind New land had opened For me to wonder In its hidden rich beauty ' so glad to hear you talking like this friend! ! ! ! ! .....nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ... i wish i can think like this..i m all negative and pessimistic! ! 10++ well deserved.. with love shan

Closed paths are apparent though in static situations of life with one finding him or herself directionless. Yet the trance is what that can make the otherwise aimless life of a human being to glow if one follows the circle of pragmatism. Best Wishes Naseer

very good decesion.knock the door, it will open. nice poem.keep it up port. voted10 surya

doors open when we're down and out, thats what love is all about.

When one path is close other path is opened......a good write.......

Complex good flow Well crafted Kranthi

Complex good flow Well crafted Kranthi

Nice poem - we all grow and learn in life. It is to become perfect and find harmony with GOD.

I like this: ''In cover of its obscurity I cried on limited power Inside my silent shelter Which time laid for me To discover my new lay'' have a profound sensitivity, Kranthi, ..well written..10+

'When my old tracks Had gone with wind New land had opened For me to wonder In its hidden rich beauty' Excellent poem. End is the new starting point. New land of hidden beauty.10+++

yu have made an impact in this poem by using metaphors......closed path really opened a new path to walk...... well penned see my 10 ++

So my old words died On tip of my tongue And new melodies came From deep inside heart I sang my new lays ------- Wow great metaphors used...melodious piece...as when someone closes the door, the windows will be opened for you...10++++++

wow boy you got a great poetic flare Loved it! that was my sis, this is me, I love it! ! ! it is amazing, it's really good! !