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For the benefit of the doubt, I’m not completely useless
My eyes drift away walking their own path
Into the darkness I seek light and constantly
Walking into the wall
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Zahir Kijani
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Hans Vr 11 June 2010

On and off, we do find ourself in apparently desperate situations. Very poetic expression of a difficult moment. I am sure you got out in the mean time, using your reason, using perhaps prayer. Every such experience tends to make us stronger. You have really the talent of describing with lots of creative images a situation or feeling. I think you are very talented poet.

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