Monday, February 20, 2006

Closed Door Comments

Rating: 4.5

Where does that closed door go?
It mocks me, a small child,
my parents inside. They tell me
they are sleeping when I know
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Caliban's Dream 21 February 2006

like this says so much and so easy to relate to the hidden world of the grown up

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Kee Thampi 20 February 2006

they are awake. These sounds I hear are as indescript as any child can possibly imagine. Imagine this, little one, you are all grown up in a small world of infinite twisting: Lies, they..... the way you write is not a funny way to keep us.... really you can make words more efectyively and hitting the morale

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