Wednesday, January 27, 2010
Close Your Mind, Listen Comments
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Times to times, we feel
Who is acting real
Now or later, as human being
For sure, we all know its ending
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Louis Rams
27 January 2010
the lord has given us free will to keep our minds from standing still.. gr8888t write a ten
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8/2/2025 12:07:09 AM # 1.0.0
In this piece there are irregular rhyme I noticed. Though unintentional, at least it didn't break the flow of the verses. If you check it out you can easily see these words. I think it's in the second stanza and the last one. Just keep writing.