Thursday, April 21, 2011

Close Your Eyes, My Angel Comments

Rating: 4.6

Close your eyes, my angel,
For now, you will see,
The wonderful, peaceful world
That once used to be.
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Tanmayi Mukundan
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 April 2020

So close your eyes, my angel, Here, your memories shall remain just For that was where you came from And that is where you shall rest! spiritual in content.. all through the poem a desire for peace and calm is so visible. lliked this poem very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 16 September 2019

Very heartfelt with beautiful rendition of words. A passionate piece of poetry with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 18 July 2014

Its a lullaby to a heart weary of turbulence.

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David Harris 18 July 2014

very moving, strikes a chord with us all I'm sure. excellent.

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Savita Tyagi 18 July 2014

Beautiful poem. Very tender and delicate expression of love and hope for eternal place.

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2013

Beautiful poem, great repetition and very well crafted.

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Rubab Atwal 18 July 2013

well written truly beautiful.....................................................

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Joseph Poewhit 18 July 2013

Words have an eternal feeling.

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Leslie Philibert 18 July 2013

well written, so well done!

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Prasanna Kumari 20 July 2012

congrats for having selected this poem as the poem of the day....it is nice bringing deep felt pain as we read on....

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Malini Kadir 20 July 2012

I love the lines Close your eyes my angle very much! ..........a sweet escape from the sourness of reality is it?

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Chijioke Akujuobi 19 July 2012

What a beautiful way to express death... I guess... A solemn one!

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Ugoh Ifeanyi 19 July 2012

Congrats on the award..nyc choreographic display. D poem is a gud one

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Godfrey Morris 18 July 2012

Most beautiful, Most inspiring and tranquil piece. A joy to read.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 18 July 2012

congrats, Tanmayi, for having this poem selected as the poem of the day! It certainly deserved to be one...it's a beautiful poem...yes, our inner worlds hold so much wealth indeed, enough to last a lifetime...

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