Close Your Eyes Comments

This is an amazing work....a depiction of what may happen, either metaphorically or literally, when one's eyes are willfully closed shut. A perfect 10.

And Pains are real But real can be so surreal All in circle circulating through tears

Wonderful.... There is only the core, no pith or outer skin! Love this brevity!

Wow a wonderful poem in the effects of words. Supers rhyming in brevity. Kudos brother.

Brevity does pack a punch

A succinct gem. You have summed up the whole life of man in these few words. We often face disillusionment in life. They don't say for nothing that life is a mystery. A10.

Yes, human emotions can do anything, a thoughtful poem.