Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Close Your Eyes Comments

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Close your eyes, see you darkness,
Open your heart, see you an ocean…
Taste this body of water,
It’s salty to mine,
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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2018

What is salty to me, may be sweet to others- a nice thought!

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Unwritten Soul 05 May 2016

....But i trust you so much till enough for me to think sugar is salty... :) what a deep and meaningful poem..loved it

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Hans Vr 30 May 2015

Closed eyes and an open heart, wonderful poem, my friend.

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