Close Your Eyes Comments

An elevating well written and conceived poem to encourage and inspire others. With a hopeful message to awaken all and see their true sense of worth. And where it can deliver them. Five stars and remain poetry and morally blessed. Thank you for sharing your most constructive poem. Take care and quite simply enjoy life.

Close your eyes Clear your head Too much going on Too much being said Close your eyes Find who you are. Great advices indeed. all these you write are born from your own experience. thank you dear poetess Lyn

I did too, but would have done it a lot sooner had I read this first......I think we are all guilty of being scared of the dark from time to time but yes there is light at the end of the tunnel, just keep walking towards it. NN

Wisdom bits Beauty sits

A moving meditation for a beautiful new beginning. Well done my friend!

Look within closing your external eyes and find your own requirements. Open your eyes to exhibit the courage to discard and give up something that won't suit you or do you any good! Make a fresh start! Great wisdom expressed in these lines! !

Excellent poem Lyn, much wisdom here.

Great wisdom all we need is courage to make a stand and live our own way! A trail blazing read!

Train analogy is well-presented, while in recital it is like the galloping sound of the rhythmic beats...! ! !