Ususally it takes me a while to put together a poem. But I found this one so easy to write, it just came to me. It's simple but thats what I like about it.
Close your eyes
and see what is inside,
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Very nice poem, thanks for sharing it with us, i close my eyes.
sometimes, i imagine that people were all blind, when that time comes, everybody will discover where the true beauty resides... i like your poem and i agree on the other poets.. it is simple yet fantastic. you expressed a great thought. keep on writing! P.S. i did not comment here just because you wrote a comment on my poem, it is because i like your poem.
Very finely written poem. Liked the natural flow and meaning and reality of the situation.
It's simple but thats what I too like about it...... For her surface is just made of skin not all the personality which lies within........i like these lines the most.....ahh so true.... beautiful poem.......... ;)
Nice write. Most of the times we go for outward appearance instead of the real person...............10+++
i open my eyes, i look at things around.. i close my eyes, i see LOVE in everything inside.. i am really inspired by your poem.. thanks for sharing! !
It is true that sometimes our vision is only for superficial but then we must see within because the inner persona matter the most. Thanks for sharing.10