Tuesday, August 25, 2009

**~close Yet So Far~** Comments

Rating: 5.0

remeber when we first met
we acted like we knew each other for a long time
and everytime you come around
the happiness inside of my heart make stand for you and smile
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dana XxX
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A poem from the heart. A wonderful write. Love; D

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Vinod Kumar 09 June 2010

Nice Poem thanks,10+

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Tom Bates 17 October 2009

this was worth the time it took to read it...nice job! keep it up

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Marcella D 06 September 2009

very intersting...........nice

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

wonderful simile; ''remeber when we first met we acted like we knew each other for a long time'' wonderful abstract lyric poem...................10

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Surya . 01 September 2009

a heart felt love story.nice write, voted10 surya

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 August 2009

creative romantic one dear dana.. love it.. hazem al..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 August 2009

Parting so far would make the hearts even closer and ever.Good job Dana.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 August 2009

because we were to close and that's what made us far away from eachother..........heart yet tells all what it knows, passionate write by luscious glow,10+++, thanks for sharing

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syaz wafea 25 August 2009

yeah..best friends are hardly be lovers, aite..huhu..nice..nway check out mine~

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