Monday, August 31, 2009

Close To The Stars.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whenever you're close to me,
I know, you go warm inside..
So just let yourself free,
There is no reason to hide..
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Abhijit Surve
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Christina Phan 04 September 2009

Fanastic job 10+++++ kept it up thoughtful and sweet poems and wondering too much

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Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

She is being coy. Nice wordings.

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Lady Grace 04 September 2009

thanks for this verses dear.. so nice to be closed to you as the stars closed to the moon to smell the scent from your sweat as roses attracts butterflies....

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Surya . 04 September 2009

a wonderful poem.nice words.this para is very good 'So now it's time to decide, What you want from my love.. Keep all your worries aside, Fly close to the stars above' voted10 surya

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