Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, October 4, 2009

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We may face onslaught and not survive
If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
Nature may not spare us for committed sin
We may have complete loss and situation no win
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Bharati Nayak 08 March 2021

Sea is loosing charm and creatures disappear Land also not spared and heavily bears Sky is already with full of aimless objects Nothing will be left on earth but only rejects---The poem was posted in 2009 and the telltale signs of nature's wrath as prophesied are so apparent now

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, a great regret that should be but, yet man follows the same course Highly impressed by the poem....10

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Ratna Patel 23 October 2009

We are polluting air with deadly gases Ground water depleting with heavy access

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2009

I closed my eyes and I see a true poet in front of me.

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Winnie Angel 16 October 2009

Theme true in essence..Winnie

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Pitilosi Mdala 14 October 2009

close the eyes nice one with teachings and more teachings

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Antonio Liao 12 October 2009

choked me in the water i drunk.....seems the body is weak yet! the heart willing, all seems the conclusion that the world is but..... has been destroyed by human wisdom....what more......what a challenging poem of our time....you have visualize the meaning of a platonic horizon....thank you my dear friend and God bless you...a 10 +++

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Twinkle Vohra 11 October 2009

Do we want compete disaster and annihilation No fresh air but only poison for inhalation Nature striking at will with deadly weapons

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Edwina K 11 October 2009

Nature may not spare us for committed sin We may have complete loss and situation no win

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Raj Nandy 11 October 2009

You have written on important current topics and problems of environment. Keep up the good work! -Raj

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Sadia Hussain 11 October 2009

We may face onslaught and not survive If no timely action is taken or efforts revived Nature may not spare us for committed

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Ramdulari Sinha 11 October 2009

Progress may be around but not to rejoice No one can claim prosperity with single voice

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Sita Kesri 11 October 2009

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over Progress may be around but not to rejoice

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Sangita Rao 11 October 2009

Nature may not spare us for committed sin We may have complete loss and situation no win

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 10 October 2009

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over Progress may be around but not to rejoice

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

We may face onslaught and not survive If no timely action is taken or efforts revived Nature may not spare us for committed sin

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

We are polluting air with deadly gases Ground water depleting with heavy access

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Darshna Chopra 10 October 2009

Do we want compete disaster and annihilation No fresh air but only poison for inhalation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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