Wednesday, June 11, 2008

' ' ' ' Close Shave - Sequence(For Miss S) Comments

Rating: 2.6

Always her fascination
with me

shaving.
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Dónall Dempsey
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Bri Edwards 09 December 2017

My first visit to your site. I enjoyed my first visit. Poem(s) to MyPoemList. I may return later with more comments. I DID read them all. I especially enjoyed tales of blue shoes and seashore to bed. Are poems drawn from your experiences as a dad? ? One omission i think in 2nd to last line. Bri :)

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Scarlett Treat 01 July 2008

I am debating as to which I love more...the beauty of the child's mind...or the beauty of the mind of Mr. Daddy, who can write it all down. Both, in my mind, near perfection. Thank you, Sweetheart, for this 'song of delight! ' Scarlett

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Onelia Avelar 11 June 2008

One delighted soft soft Mr. Daddy...writing delightfully about every form of love!

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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