'Close My Eyes And Drift Off Into Eternity Comments

i agree with paolo it seems as if you are waiting for death to come like a person who waits for a phone call knowing it may never come

thinking of eternity can be taken as positive here...the thoughts can blow off the negative feelings..... to think of heaven is good but Earth is the right place to love and live...enjoyed reading this one too.

The presence of death is essential in this poem, as in life. Then there's a feeling that one is going to do a forbidden thing...