bloodshed outdoors
worship indoors
i should listen to
either of the two
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let my heart close and mind open...culture taught us all what faith says.... all have just comes in its own way.....your a poet of a vision....i salute your style....the each line reveals...thank you and GOD BLESS you....my salute my friend....a 10 +++++
The write up is good. It would be better if u modify your last stanza Regards, Sikta
well a little confusing for me. the last para is perplexing. 'close i, myself and me close me, myself, i close myself, i and me close i and me, myself ' voted10 surya
i like the way the words flow, nice job dear, keep writing dont close