Thursday, October 16, 2008

Clockportphobia Comments

Rating: 4.7

Clockportphobia is what they call my disease
Oh, I'm sorry; let me explain please
I can't think of the past
I might warp there oh so fast!
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Dillon Gay
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Raven Bishop 12 January 2009

The one reason why I like this poem is that it's interesting and unique.

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nicelly written nt xactly my type of poem but i really like the ending nicely done...and keep up the...geatness... =)

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 October 2008

I agree with Frank about this being a very creative piece . Never underestimate the importance of creativity . Your future is probably not in poetry . You should join the motion picture industry . GW62

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 October 2008

An imaginary disease about imaging...hmmm...Imagine that....your imaging capabilities are healthy, afterall....Commendable work, esppecially, taking your very young age....The potential is there...for the learning & taking...The air, and space are your limits....READ, READ & READ YOUR CONTEMPORARY POETS....And keep that pen pumping, young man. F j R (())

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Elizabeth Peterson 23 October 2008

This is chilling. Very well written, very creative. Thank you for sharing! I'll look at more of your poetry when I have more time! E

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Joshua Swanson 19 October 2008

You like to make up your own words do you not? Clockportphobia, Uumpsca (or oomsca, oompscka, oonsca, ümpsca) How do you spell it? Good poem. What do you mean by the dinosaur being 'automatic'? Hmm? J/K.

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