Clockportphobia is what they call my disease
Oh, I'm sorry; let me explain please
I can't think of the past
I might warp there oh so fast!
...
Read full text
nicelly written nt xactly my type of poem but i really like the ending nicely done...and keep up the...geatness... =)
I agree with Frank about this being a very creative piece . Never underestimate the importance of creativity . Your future is probably not in poetry . You should join the motion picture industry . GW62
An imaginary disease about imaging...hmmm...Imagine that....your imaging capabilities are healthy, afterall....Commendable work, esppecially, taking your very young age....The potential is there...for the learning & taking...The air, and space are your limits....READ, READ & READ YOUR CONTEMPORARY POETS....And keep that pen pumping, young man. F j R (())
This is chilling. Very well written, very creative. Thank you for sharing! I'll look at more of your poetry when I have more time! E
You like to make up your own words do you not? Clockportphobia, Uumpsca (or oomsca, oompscka, oonsca, ümpsca) How do you spell it? Good poem. What do you mean by the dinosaur being 'automatic'? Hmm? J/K.
The one reason why I like this poem is that it's interesting and unique.