Clock Of Ages Comments
The clay beneath her muddy feet, welled up between her toes,
A squeal of unencumbered bliss, from her young soul arose,
Dancing in the rain alone, arms spread-eagled wide,
An aged mother looking on, shook her head and sighed.
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beautiful...... nicely penned......thanks for sharing...
Something very beautiful caught within the moment yet somehow so totally free Amazing writing Love duncan mark wyllie
This has a great singy sound to it, and a wonderful poetic phrase for a close. nicely penned! =)
“Remember well these carefree times…before the clock of ages chimes......as the time heaves the mystery life acyclic, wonderful expressin yet ingeniously curved across the time and space,10+++, thanks for sharing
...these few lines chime out the poetic perception of the reality hovering over the minds of the aged.Perhaps your short piece may cast a long spell on the minds of the readers.Thanks a lot Mr Alf Hutchison for sharing.. Keep writing.
aging, disease and death are the sad realities of life........a good write...
dear alf.....some childhood memories remain in the heart...and when we look back we experience a sense of joy, watching children do the same.lovely poem, full of feelings.best wishes. ritty
nice poem. lengthy with five lines may be writen as seven or eight.. nice thread...
WoOoW........excellent poem.........beautiful lines.....awesome imagery......love it..........
An old women relives her youth, in her daughter's carefree rain dance. Simply outstanding. Voted 10.
the most important thing about us aging.... is brought down in few words.. a strong write..
very beautiful poem rhymed so well gone are the childhood days nice poem
A fine philosophical verse full of celebration of innocent joys.
Hi I just loved reading these lines. It took me back to my childhood and I could feel the clay well up between my toes. The poem also reflects the happier moments of ones life. Very well written. I am putting it down as one of my favourites.
childhood days are always fun, nice short poem.... lovely!
Wonderful descriptive poem.....Great..! ! 10+, loved reading it
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7/18/2025 10:02:45 PM # 1.0.0
Sweet childhood memory, that always follows me... Nice one.