Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Cloaking Faces Comments

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People are not what they appear
Their true selves are what they fear
For if they reveal themselves they are vulnerable to being rejected
They want to be in the popular crowd, not neglected
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Kieran J96 03 June 2010

this is so true one of my friends is like that great poem thnx 2 sharing

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Kitty Vans 21 May 2010

there are so many ppl here at my school like that it drives me crazy......but i loved the poem it clearly showed anger and a lot of other emotions.....keep it up

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Michael Brock 19 April 2010

Very good poem, good flow of thought and imagery. It is sad to think people loose themselves into the group, but the truth is... Keep writing, really enjoy your work Michael

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