Cloaked Love Comments

(cont.) you seem to be heavily-promoting silence. hmm? i know someone 'close to me' who often wishes i were/was silent! and as for few words being preferred, i like these few, which i sometimes hear about now: Dinner time i've gotta run! thanks for sharing. it is good to see some new poems from you. bri ;)

do you guys over THERE spell careful with 2 L's usually? vows from tongue how often breaks in time gets lost like melting flakes and the flattering tongue how comely greets but in silence, there is no deceit i liked 1st 2 lines especially; last two i did not understand. is there...................supposed to be a period after greets? (cont)

In silence, there is no deceit.... Lovely poem with a nice message. keep writting Kanav you back ph after a long break

Words can be so hollow! Loud proclamations of love often cool down into empty nothingness! When heart is full with love, words are few! Well conceived thoughts put into free flowing verse!

The array of words, fit with emotions in between and the flow of the narration make me think its is a heartfelt, maybe close from your heart or maybe close inspiration. Beautiful

A refined poetic imagination, Kanav. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Kanav and do remain enriched.

but in silence, there is no deceit.....Silence does not lie.......... very good poem on love and its problems and fineness. tony

A lovely poem... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem and express your views too.. Naila