Cloak-And-Dagger! Solo Digger With A Dagger Digs A Dingle In Jungle! Comments

Loneliness is killing.You need Ahorn syrup to kill it completely...it resembles the leaves of the flag of Canada though am not sure if Ahorn trees are best grown there in so much coldness.Loneliness is also one.But summer will come with a sunshine.Nothing is permanent.Love is not a seedless raisin.True love will come to sow its seeds for your loneliness also.Wait for your chance to ferment the grape to kiss angels before you meet demons.. I wrung my hands beneath my veil... 'Why are you so pale today? ' - Because I forced him to get drunk On sorrow's sour wine. How can I forget? He lurched outside, His mouth was twisted up in pain... Not touching the banister, I ran down, I ran after him to the gate. Gasping, I cried: 'It was but a joke All of it. If you should leave, I'd die.' He smiled a calm and horrible smile And said: 'Don't stand out in the wind.' Anna Akhmatova, Kiev, Ukraine 1911 Soviet Union.........that was love and feelings of a true woman 100 years back....translated though into english from original Russian slavic scripts.... i hope you will avail the chance..

Truly beautiful. I cannot believe I haven't read this one before! It is echoing my life, that's why I was avoiding your poetry. It hurts reading about your own loneliness through somebody else's handwriting. The verses starting with single man, are so great that I want to copy it, using the title single woman. Harry, I find your poetry inspiring. It's really beautiful, just like your soul...

Truly beautiful. I cannot believe I haven't read this one before! It is echoing my life, that's why I was avoiding your poetry. It hurts reading about your own loneliness through somebody else's handwriting. The verses starting with single man, are so great that I want to copy it, using the title single woman. Harry, I find your poetry inspiring. It's really beautiful, just like your soul...

'Everybody deserted me; I’m friendless with my co brother aloneness; One moonless day, walked arm in arm in our farm – I and aloneness! ' Your words paint very vivid imagery, its a tantalizing sight, great work here. :)

Sorcerer of words, Enchanted me with those beads, That his neck worn; Gifted me a blissful boon! ! ! Everybody deserted me: I'm friendless with my co brother aloneness! ! The real poetic line of this poem.. Great write from the crony of words! ! ! 10+++

You master the words, pull the string and arrange the movement of them nicely! ! everything in your hand :) i love the single stanza..the contrast make huge things to think and the next stanza smoothing the feel in me, to feel some of what you said... :) you so talented! ! my favorite parts are: 'Everybody deserted me; I’m friendless with my co brother aloneness; One moonless day, walked arm in arm in our farm – I and aloneness! Standing in my dingle – I'm still down here looking for loneliness.... Sitting in a jungle – please supply a ray of light cried I with loneliness' great lines! ! ! ......keep writing my friend_Unwritten Soul

Very well written poem, With a lonely touch to it, perfect! 'Everybody deserted me; I’m friendless with my co brother aloneness; One moonless day, walked arm in arm in our farm – I and aloneness! '

NICE POEM SIR...ITS LOOKING LIKE A ROBO...