Thursday, June 27, 2019

Clink, Clink Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk home in the evening
To the sound of bottles in a bag
The wine, beer and whisky
Tapping together like morse code
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Matthew Holloway
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Aqua Flower 28 June 2019

A brilliant expression on addiction and alcohol abuse, The imagery here is amazing. Good write my friend!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2019

All the way to my door/Following my the stairs to bed/Clink, clink, clink.........sparkling expression my friend! An amazing write..........................10

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Carl Roussell 27 June 2019

Good poem on addiction; sometimes one is not even aware of the problem. A 10

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 June 2019

drunkard mind enjoy the kingship reign!

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Matthew Holloway

Matthew Holloway

Cheshire, England
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