Sunday, February 22, 2009

Clinically Explainable Comments

Rating: 5.0

Polydipsic, polyuric

Terribly sweats when I’m with you
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Xyza Dile
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Xy-za Dile 08 March 2009

thank you so much.. i'm happy you enjoyed it. =)

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Stephen Stirk 02 March 2009

Hi I really enjoyed your poem 'Clinically explainable'. You're not afraid of going the extra mile to pour out the feelings on to paper. Thanks for posting Steve Clinically Nuts

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Ency Bearis 22 February 2009

great 1st stanza - thirsty and frequent urination...excessive enthusiasm.. nice coined words from symptoms of diabetes or atropine/belladona poisoning in the first and mostly urinating frequently due to diabetes into poetic stanza and used as a simile to so much enthusiasm of infatuation or excessive love upon seeing the apple of your eyes...thus it is clinically explained..nice concept...10

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Xyza Dile

Xyza Dile

Roxas City, Phils
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