Clinging To A Precious Dream Comments

'Clinging to a precious dream Yet still it's not come true, The hope grows ever distant now But no more can I do'... lines i most liked in this beautiful poem...clinging to your dream and trying to reach for your distant hope...sad...yet sweet as a read, Andrew...10

This is like the story of Beauty and the Beast, when the last petal was about to fall But wait Andrew, there is more! ! ! Take care Love duncan X

Andrew, this is written with so many pedals of sadness and yet filled with so much hope of a better tomorrow.. Although the reader sences a feel of sympathy, it also makes the reader feel a sence of pride for which you have written inspite of the sadness from within.... Very good write, but dont ask me, as I love all your writtings! ! Bonnie

Beautifully written piece and raw with tender feelings. There is hope with each new day, look ahead so that new chances don't become 'chances that have passed'. Wonderful poem and heartfelt too. Best wishes, Kathleen.

A sad and touching poem Andrew brilliantly written! *10plus*! ! Keep clinging to your precious dream For 'one day' love will come your way Loves not blind and this you'll find - Till then this precious dream will stay! Friend Thad

Hold tight and brace the winds of change, is that a glimpse of sunlight i see on the horizon? Skillfully written piece Andrew, but then, it is you we are talking about, so that comes without saying Take care Love duncan X