Friday, June 19, 2020

Climbing Up The Golden Stair..Final Version. Comments

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A little boy while at play,
Counted on a high stairway.
Now so sleepy he did sway,
At the closing of the day.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Tony just to let you know there are a few versions of this poem with differences to make it flow and beat better, To reach this final version. Thanks again and take care.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 June 2020

She will play and she will sing, And her love to me she'll bring. I will hug her way up there, Climbing up the golden stair. in her rocking chair, she waits for you...... lovely sentiments with poetic excellence. tony

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Shaun Cronick 20 June 2020

Thank you Tony for your always apricated and welcome comments. I'm glad a great world-class poet as you enjoyed reading it. Thanks again and take care good Tony.

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Shaun Cronick 21 June 2020

Also Tony please forgive my latter comment's atrocious and infamous spelling of the word appreciated. When I wrote that, Mr Sandman must have been softly whispering in my ear. Thanks again and take care.

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