Sunday, March 29, 2020

Climbing Up The Golden Stair... Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little boy while at play,
Counted on a high stairway.
Now so sleepy he did sway,
At the closing of the day.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2020

What a deeply moving and poignant write. Very touching.My heart cries for this little boy. A vivid portrayal of an innocent and eternal love. So beautifully written with great imagery. Onto my Poem List.10+++

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Shaun Cronick 02 April 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for your kind and warmly welcomed great comment. I wanted to write something sad but with a little love and hope enshrined within. This is the final version. Thanks again Rose Marie and take care and the loved ones all around your good self.

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