Monday, January 13, 2014

Climb That Mountain Comments

Rating: 4.9

I have given to all
Yet I have never given to myself
I have guided so many
Yet not myself
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Lyn Paul
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Varsha M 29 June 2021

Full of positivity and fighting spirit. You are truly encouraging. Thank-you so much

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2021

Beautifully and powerfully conveyed. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2021

The deep insight and wisdom embedded in this poetic gem can propel our spirit to soar and claim our own star.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2021

What a wonderful poem. Very inspiring.

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Shaun Cronick 15 December 2020

Where does one begin after reading so many fine lines. A poem filled with inspiration, hope and wisdom. A poem that raises the bar in believing in oneself. Sometimes this life can deal the odd cruel card but we stay the course with renewed inner strength. Five stars. And thank you for raising any readers depleted spirits and take care

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 November 2020

Waiting to fall Yet we must rise... For only ourselves To see achievement Of heartfelt wealth So Climb That Mountain Even if you don't make the height You will be proud you never.... Gave up the fight, .....so impressive expression having outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thank you dear madam for sharing this poem with us. Five stars.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 November 2020

This is filled with beauty and inspiration! .. With much power and melody your heart does sing! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many Stars+++++++......

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A B Faniki 16 September 2019

Thank your for sharing this iplifting poem that tourches my heart. It is a lovely poem. Great write

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 02 August 2019

Truly inspirational poetic expression! Climb That Mountain - probably so many of us need to hear this message! Thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

Inspirational poem, giving is the only way you can get satisfaction and it pays back in some form. Liked the tone of the poem, Nicely penned.10+++++++++++++++++++

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

This is what I needed to read right now, an wonderful inspirational poem, thank you Lyn

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Hans Vr 02 November 2018

Super beautiful poem, filled with wisdom. I love it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2018

I have seen the smiles I bring To so many, when my heart sings I have seen the joy I get from the simple things around. the joy that we derive from simple things and the beautiful way of life we lead in simplicity is godly......... you have written a fine poem dear poetess. tony

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Dominic Windram 23 March 2018

Very inspirational poem. I also love the picture that accompanies it. Thanks for sharing!

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Louis Rams 26 February 2018

you have climbed the mountain and like an eagle you have spread your wings to show your heart in the poems you bring

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Seamus O Brian 15 February 2018

An inspiring and challenging piece. Well written, my friend. I enjoyed and take to heart the message of this piece as its timeliness never expires.

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Indira Renganathan 11 January 2018

Your faith in yourself and the determination to rise whatsoever happens in life is so commendably portrayed in this poem...you are a lotus in this murky life....God bless you and wish you a very Happy and Peaceful New Year....thank you for your comment on my poem

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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

An insightful motivational and inspirational piece of poetry with rich flow of thought. A well thought out poem. Thanks for sharing Lyn.

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Savita Tyagi 10 March 2017

Great poem with great message. Life's journey is arduous but not giving up is what makes a difference in leading a satisfactory life. Live to your heart's content. Thanks for sharing.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 18 April 2016

Lovely poem, especially the opening lines, I have given to all, Yet I have never given to myself...Artists generally feel this way; yes, never give up and hold fast to dreams, as Langston Hughes says in his poem 'Dreams.'

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