Monday, February 26, 2018

Climb Comments

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G-et ready to climb,
I-n spite of the tough trek;
N-ever be afraid of height,
A-im not to be a wreck.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 February 2018

A great acrostic write well penned. Yes, be brave to go upward, undaunted by the hard time. 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2018

B-e brave to go upward, U-ndaunted by the hard time; R-ise above the ground, A-s you start the uphill C-limb...........nice expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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