Climax Of A Long Story Comments

lovely write............. i still cherish your poem on peace...........

Wow, this says so much. So powerful.... I guess she had a change of heart!

A very fine little poem: an old story told in a fresh image. This is a jewel, both for the writer and the translator.

Another excellent write - so typical of today when love and pain thereof is a passing game for some

its really a long story told in a few words. it evokes rural images i am so familiar with. tThe pain, transient nature of relationships, break up all expressed so vividly like a painting in words. In spite of myself I even smiled at your choice of metaphors... Mamta

Here probably u are talking about infidelity! How easily people forget each other. May be I'm wrong.

between the scent of the mud and the rain's beauty born a baby beautiful poem..

I will write End of a long story. Good one

: THE HEAVY RAIN DEMOLISHED MY MUD GRASS HOME PEOPLE ARE HAPPY THAT FLOWER WOULD BLOOM'GOOD POEM SIR

the feelings on this poem are truly genuine and full of emotion! marvelous!

I liked the promptness of this poem and at the same time has alot of feeling

Climax or anti climax? At the end I feel more of the anti-climax...food for thought here also.

your long story was compressed and made it more great to read.Nice write

your long story was compressed and made it more great to read.Nice write

Great, great, great! A big applause...it's really a part and the end of a long story. A climax indeed.

this is genious. kind of heart breaking. i love it.

This is a nice poem, even though you used a few lines.

such an expressive poem, meaningful one! ! !

nice piece...vivid and expressive in few short lines...thanks, Naseer 10

It is true............in brief you have expressed.