To live under rays of golden sun
Where streams of sweet water run
Plants and trees live, to cover the land
Smiles are everywhere and love is grand
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Well, this is what heaven should be like. Great imagination. 'You can feel the colors and breathe the sound'. This is really excellent, coz it is an altogether different plane of perception. It happens with people using marijuana, but i am sure by 'the magic you have found' you arent referring to it. I thank you for a wonderful poem coz it is just overflowing with happiness. (unlike a big majority of poems here) .
There's a bubble in this one This poem is a great fun This reflects a true DC The one the world wants 2 C...
That was very nice well written