Sunday, December 29, 2013

Cliffhanger Comments

Rating: 4.8

Stay holding on to the moutain cliff!
Beacuse deep down below all you can find is grief.
You have come too far above touching the sky.
Imagine about all you have tolerated to come this high.
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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

Very well written with great passion for life, belief in oneself is everything!

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Payal Parande 30 December 2013

very good, i must say you are blossoming good work

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Mike Barrett 29 December 2013

Nathan, now you're writing poetry! Good for you! . Still room for polish....for example you've written, Believe yourself and you can accomplish wonder, what if you had written, Believe in yourself and you can accomplish wonders.? There may be a few other sentences to polish, but man, you're realizing your potential. Great job!

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