Saturday, May 28, 2005

Clicking Moments Comments

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clicking moments
listlessly away
days escape like loosely held sand
the road less travelled seems lost
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Stefan nnn
fog
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Raynette Eitel 04 June 2005

Stefan, to me the 'clicking moments' image doesn't go with 'days escape like loosely held sand' which by the way, it a nice image. When I first went to this poem, I thought it might be about taking pictures. I really like 'dense fog of ennui.' You have lovely images in your head. Raynette

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