Your absence consumes me so hard
Just hard as your unbearable presence
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'Your absence consumes me so hard Just hard as your unbearable presence' beautifully expressed...love IS like that... cheers! !
Ananda, Just read this poem...BEAUTIFUL! You have a real talent. I gave you a 10. Your friend, Cecelia
Put together VERY well, and beautifully said. You have some killer lines here. S x
Ananda, it is very deep and powerful, surprising and insightful too. A special poem.. reflecting special feelings! Frank
Conflicting emotions here Ananda... Love to hate and back to love again, yes some relationships are like that..well written poem...10
This is a wonderful poem Ananda. Certainly a pleasure to read it. I love how you present the conflict of love and hate... How one thing can be good and at the same time... consuming or over whelming. Keep up the good work. This poem is terrific. -Aroob
Ananda, this is a lovely love poem. It is filled with sweet enchanting words. A worthy 10 in my mind. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David
Another very nicely written piece which I enjoyed reading. I'm sure I shall return to read it again. Thank you Annie.