Sunday, May 6, 2007

Cliché Love Comments

Rating: 4.6

Your absence consumes me so hard
Just hard as your unbearable presence
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Ananda Alves
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Les Derbyshire 26 March 2009

Another very nicely written piece which I enjoyed reading. I'm sure I shall return to read it again. Thank you Annie.

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Honest Heart 19 March 2009

greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat....well done :)

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Who's Erwhatsit 03 June 2007

I admit it. You make me jealous; -) great write. DK

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Tapas Dutta 10 May 2007

'Your absence consumes me so hard Just hard as your unbearable presence' beautifully expressed...love IS like that... cheers! !

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Cecelia Warner 08 May 2007

Ananda, Just read this poem...BEAUTIFUL! You have a real talent. I gave you a 10. Your friend, Cecelia

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Stug Jordan 07 May 2007

Put together VERY well, and beautifully said. You have some killer lines here. S x

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Frank Bana 07 May 2007

Ananda, it is very deep and powerful, surprising and insightful too. A special poem.. reflecting special feelings! Frank

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 May 2007

Conflicting emotions here Ananda... Love to hate and back to love again, yes some relationships are like that..well written poem...10

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Eudora M.A.S.S.A 07 May 2007

This is a wonderful poem Ananda. Certainly a pleasure to read it. I love how you present the conflict of love and hate... How one thing can be good and at the same time... consuming or over whelming. Keep up the good work. This poem is terrific. -Aroob

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David Harris 06 May 2007

Ananda, this is a lovely love poem. It is filled with sweet enchanting words. A worthy 10 in my mind. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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