Friday, November 27, 2009

Clever Comments

Rating: 3.3

She walks the ramp her heart in mouth
She's sure her move will leave no doubt
In reason logic and in mind
A trail of clues she leaves behind
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mandara pookal
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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 December 2009

A well composed poem by Mandara pookal.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 December 2009

Great thoughts. Well penned Nice poem with meaningful expression Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 28 November 2009

an open door you leave...very 'clever' 'moves' Mandara...liked your words a lot...expressive impressive piece...10...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 November 2009

clever...a thought sure of itself should express itself...catering to others whims does not take us far...a lovely thought in action

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