Cleopatra was the queen of Egypt;
Cleopatra was the queen of beauty.
She came to the throne at her eighteen
The first century BC witnessed it.
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The poem is as fascinating as the story of this famous queen. A remarkable life history she has. Her beauty and wits were just so supreme. Thanks for sharing. Makes me want to read about her again.
Reading your poem after watching a French rendering of Caesar and C leopard is so fulfilling. So much research in this poem. It left me more fascinated by queen. I
Life of Cleopatra a wonderful woman in history nicely told in the poem.Like it.
A good poem on a historical lady and queen and her life and it is beautifully made as a poem.
This is a great autobiographical poem which documents her entire life, Ive already know the basics of her life, but its great to see it depicted with great cadence, you make her come alive with vitality. Nice touch with the Shakespeare Quote
wonderful simile The Rome emperor and the Egyptian queen Loved, like of which no pair ever did wonderful historical poem 10/10
an archives of word, bonded to make a poem of yesteryears past rewritten to lime the most powerful queen of Egypt....such a beautiful poem of today....a history in a making....thank you for sharing...God bless....10+
wow, Im impressed, that's a very lovely 'historical story trelling' poem, I guess it's a poetic and amazing way to know more about her, the queen of beauty, lovely poem, I guess you mastared this piece very well, it's well expressed and your words are just amazing, brilliant :)
a lovely narration of cleopatras glory i always admired her beauty and stories of her. -10 anjali
I did not know Cleopatra's full story. Your poem is well woven to tell the story and to justify a women's love. I liked the way you ended the story. Very nice.
Lovely well composed narrative that brings to light a great love story told in history with a really good view on women.No matter what age we are we are still important even if it is for only one special someone ourself.
very well composed narrative poem, holds interest throughout. relived the movie Cleopatra while reading it. thanks Mamta
annot be compared with the world beauties we see today. AiA good narrative poem! The famously called serpent like beauty Cleopatra for her survival enticed one emperor and his friend and met with death at last by killing herself with serpent bite! She csh is quite unique!
She came, she saw and she conquered, a beautiful poem on Cleopatra.