Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Clenched Fists Comments

Rating: 3.7

Freedom washed with tears rinsed by blood,
dried with heat of love from one's heart,
some unknown, but alone they're not,
fell on the ground where lilies once sprout.
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Dee Gey
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 04 September 2024

Poignant write, an agonising commentary on the contemporary times.. Though published in 2008, every word of the poem is still relevant. Top score.

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Ency Bearis 08 October 2008

a verses with full emotion..well narrated/write..excellently done.... Ency Bearis

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 October 2008

Dee, You have real talent, you feel the pain and hear the cries, the true sign of a brilliant write... so very well done.. Andrew 10

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