I hate,
I don't like
What does this means?
Whom do you dislike?
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The struggle of youth to create its identity craftfully teased out and played with through the basic, parental matrix. deep questionings tackled here. perhaps stanza breaks might aid the reader? Great job, Ashly!
We too readily harbour feelings of dislike and 'hatred - we should be more mindful and understanding. A very wise write