Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Clearless Hate Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hate,
I don't like
What does this means?
Whom do you dislike?
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Ashly Raju
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Valerie Dohren 19 May 2013

We too readily harbour feelings of dislike and 'hatred - we should be more mindful and understanding. A very wise write

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Doug Bentley 30 September 2012

The struggle of youth to create its identity craftfully teased out and played with through the basic, parental matrix. deep questionings tackled here. perhaps stanza breaks might aid the reader? Great job, Ashly!

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