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An utterly amazing poem! Your imagery is totally sensuous and enticing! Your lines from Fold your umbrella walls to the end of the poem were absolutely superb! ! The way you describe green grass of my belief, kisses like red azaleas, long stemmed lazy afternoons, cherry blossom smiles - all amazingly brilliant stuck now in my mind where you have planted them. Magnificent poem, can't say enough about it, love it! Another 10! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

Your choice of descriptive terminology opens a vista of sensual opportunities for the reader, Susan. I had forgotten your talent when it comes to works of this nature and it was an absolute delight to read this submission. Your vivid imagination is in high gear and shows magically with each flow of line. Indeed, a superb work in all aspects. Thank you for a grand and noteworthy effort.