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I just love your use of words Howards so skilfull and so emotional too...thank you for letting us in...

....a fine piece indeed.........10+

Hello Howard Yes, a lovely piece. I liked the words, coinciding, fervor, horizon, Pixy dust, compunction. These words meld the poem into an enjoyable experience. Adeline

a nice piece to read. keep going sir :)

Howard, 'The lapse of consciousness creates a fugitive Escaping the compunction of life' From the help 'with it' somebody has not escaped far while, but I will tell the truth, at you it has well turned out 'internal space' Sincerely, Tsira

Your imagery is great. This is so very well written... Truly beautiful piece of poetry...

Wow...A very pretty poem Howard...nicely done...love the images...it rained stars last night... Hugs, Dee

Beautiful words here Howard, quite the visual...............All the best, Diane

Life is full of complications.. only....we make them. Good verse. Best wishes suzan

It is a beautiful write. I need to grow up a little bit to understand it fully.

It rained stars last night Over a black umbrella They rolled across darkness Scatter like silver marbles Now that's great poetry, well done again Howard, sheer excellence Love duncan X