Clear Water Comments

This is fantastic. I feel like it's all happening to me. -ralph

a touching ink.liked the flow and wording and emotion involved.

Compelling! Very like my own - 'a note.'

Great poem! ! ....++10++ Thanks a lot for your comment...Merna

Your style is great.In simple language you are expressing a lot of theme; and your theme are very deeply philosophical.

to grab it, to grab life, to grab fear, to embrace you. sounds like an angel wow...

Wonderfully descriptive poem enhanced by its brevity. Truly enjoyed it. Adeline

A great visual poem, I can see the scene, feel the water.

a truly visual poem, effective and bringing us into the water with you :)) a poem of freedom and of trust; lovely thanks Pia, Love Penny xxx

this is the ultimate desire for human to have a clear hand waiting for him!

Great depth, A lovely poem. Adeline

Very lovely and compelling. I like what you see from your own personal window on the world. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

Meaning hidden yet clearly seen

Dear Pia I found my-self reading this piece again, it is so lovely well done Take care and have a lovely Easter All the best Oh and before I forget, thankyou for the card Love duncan X

This is simply (complexly) beautiful. Totally original, this poem strikes to the heart. - Will

A confidence building exercise to anyone reading these lines.

I love it! especially the part about grabbing fear... that is part of the reality of being absorbed by the blue!

I truly enjoy reading this poem---excellent---Melvina

All of us here, together...... We should discover this expression and call it CLEAR POETRY........ This is indeed a very CLEARly expressed poems I have seen for a long time..... good read indeed!

I love your poetry because it is filled with an expectation of goodness and trust. This is wonderful.