Wednesday, May 16, 2018

Clear The Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

What may your biggest worries be
To rid the cure of anxiety
To bare the root of depression
To rid the soul of aggression
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Lyn Paul
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Jennifer Birchall 07 March 2019

This is so true for me right no, the stress and worry of it all, you have put things into perspective and my me stop and think. Thank you for that. Wonderful poem.

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Captain Cur 04 September 2018

A true ending to a new beginning. Having life is wealth says it all. More good can be done, more accomplished with the asset of a passionate life, worth more than all the money in the world.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2018

(cont.) p.s. competing? i won't try keeping up with the Joneses; they are millionaires. the only millions this old guy, Bri, has now is.......a million grey/gray shedding hairs.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2018

(cont.) But do we survive OR But we do survive...if you used a question mark i would know the answer. some favorite lines: Curing the heart of pain Releasing those much needed tears Soaking your skin like rain to MyPoemList. and i enjoyed the comments left as well. smile! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) (cont.)

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2018

Que sera, sera! 'Whatever will be, will be! The future is not ours to see! ' So, let it be, let it be!

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Smoky Hoss 14 July 2018

Bravo. So good. So true. The last few months have been very stressful for me, you've wrote a beautiful poem here giving me pause to ponder; thank you!

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Savita Tyagi 18 June 2018

Beautiful poem. Darkness of worries consume so much of our energy that we forget to see the sunshine spread all around.

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Tony Karas 01 June 2018

An excellent write. Life is not picnic. My biggest concern? My marriage. Will it survive all of this?

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Robert Murray Smith 25 May 2018

The mind needs something to talk to itself. It can be naturally inclined to negativity. Ousting those thoughts and concentrating on the positive is the way to go.++10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 May 2018

Dear Lyn, such a profound poem....10++++

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Rini Shibu 16 May 2018

Great poem..find the biggest worry to make things improved

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yoonoos peerbocus 16 May 2018

greatly pleased on reading this lovely piece-keep writing

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