Friday, September 1, 2006

....Clear Skies Comments

Rating: 5.0

She hovers like a lonely lost cloud
I have no rope long enough to reach her
She begs for rescue but the wind is to loud
She fades into the distance like a falling feather.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 September 2006

this is really a good one. fit to be in any respectable anthology. your anchor poem if you should become famous.

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Mary Nagy 01 September 2006

This poem seems sad at the thought that he lost his love but yet I feel a sense of hope since the skies are clear. I enjoyed this very much Vincent. Sincerely, Mary

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Marilyn Shepperson 01 September 2006

Very sad, but well written Marilyn

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