Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...
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Nice write Jesus, As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! Nicely articulated JD...I vote 10+++
Well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Beautiful poem written in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Like gazing at the sky, my love for you has no boundaries. Nice write!
You tell of love in an amazing manner. I enjoyed the flow and graduations. Good work my friend. God bless you. I kindly invite you to read my poem: STEALING GLANCES
For to be with out Love is a serious form of Poverty. Great arrangement.
A yearning heart can express the lost love in a beautiful way. Very touchy poem, my compliments and Plus Ten for sensitive and expressive piece of work.
Sometimes we share the love through the beauty of the nature, this is one of them, beatiful
The display of nature! With the muse of life. Nice work.
Good rhyming poems are often not easy to come about....However, this is one of those rare occasions! tfs! ! !
Hoping, thinking, dreaming, and yearning...this is something only poets can do...
Wonderful poetry...it was really a pleasure reading it!
Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart!
As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! an eloquent and beautiful write 10+++
combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it a beautiful poem to read
What a wonderful piece of poetry. Loved it Sir. Takes us back to watch the clear sky and long for our loved ones.
Lovely lines loaded with love and inspiration! !