Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Clear Blue Sky Comments

Rating: 4.4

Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Lovely lines loaded with love and inspiration! !

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Nice write Jesus, As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! Nicely articulated JD...I vote 10+++

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2018

Well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Beautiful poem written in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 October 2016

Like gazing at the sky, my love for you has no boundaries. Nice write!

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Wilma De Guzman 29 July 2016

Beautifuly written and expressed clearly!

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Allotey Abossey 07 January 2016

You tell of love in an amazing manner. I enjoyed the flow and graduations. Good work my friend. God bless you. I kindly invite you to read my poem: STEALING GLANCES

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Howard Savage 30 December 2015

For to be with out Love is a serious form of Poverty. Great arrangement.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2015

A yearning heart can express the lost love in a beautiful way. Very touchy poem, my compliments and Plus Ten for sensitive and expressive piece of work.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 25 December 2015

Sometimes we share the love through the beauty of the nature, this is one of them, beatiful

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

The display of nature! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 12 November 2015

Good rhyming poems are often not easy to come about....However, this is one of those rare occasions! tfs! ! !

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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 July 2015

Hoping, thinking, dreaming, and yearning...this is something only poets can do...

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 03 October 2013

Wonderful poetry...it was really a pleasure reading it!

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R.j. Wynn 06 August 2013

Love this song of love. I relate to it.

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Hazel Durham 28 July 2013

Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart!

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! an eloquent and beautiful write 10+++

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 July 2013

combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it a beautiful poem to read

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Indranil Bhaduri 23 July 2013

What a wonderful piece of poetry. Loved it Sir. Takes us back to watch the clear sky and long for our loved ones.

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