Sunday, May 29, 2005

Cleansed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I only half heard the continuous splash
Of the water falling wearily into the tub
From the far away, invisible, silver faucet.
(some distant part of me, half thought that
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Christine Austin Cole
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Michael Harmon 20 May 2009

'As he first rambled simple to profound Before turning profound to something obvious.' Something the poem itself seems to mirror in a very creative and intimate way. Your use of 'Plain style' (in your poems) is expert and always entertaining. My guess would be you have studied under current-day poets-of-renown.

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“I closed mine To see if I would” Poem has actually peaked here—your ability to wed to disparate streams of thought in a monolithic whole is just awesome. Poem remained aridly drenched all the way through

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Anthony Edmond John 25 July 2008

I love this one keep it up... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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James B. Earley 06 July 2008

An excellent choice of title!

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Frank Cannon 26 April 2008

I have bathed my soul awhile in your words and leave rewarded and refreshed....

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