Thursday, November 7, 2013

Cleaning Up His Mess Comments

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His deep voice beckoned my back to my room
To complete a task I had done before.
But now I was to clean up his mess
As if wiping up his spilled milk.
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Derrick Thompson
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Mary Amrutha 25 November 2013

nice work............................

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Saint Cynosure 19 November 2013

WOW...like this a lot...

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Amos Christopherson Masereka 07 November 2013

Cleaning Up His Mess, i like it, its emotional

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