Monday, August 11, 2008

Cleaning My Empty Room Comments

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I didn’t know this empty room was so full
Until I began to clean its mess of emptiness.

Vacant houses in corner webs,
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Meggie Gultiano 09 May 2009

too many insects and outsects... i LOVE THIS...maybe i will clean my room again tomorrow. Enjoyed this write..thanks, Sir Ben

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 December 2008

We're our own world, our families and friends and our enemies are our own world too.Nice writes bro.

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Vilma Xelin 12 August 2008

I should do the cleaning on my headroom too... too many insects and outsects... too many times the same mistake, like buy too many times the same shoes, cause I have never use the first pair... and I bought it and bought it again... thanks for the vivid and ironic way that you used to take me to this reflection! I have to clean my room...

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