Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Clean Pair Of Knickers Comments

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Not knowing
whether you would stay

(or not)
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Val Morehouse 12 September 2008

Knickers. An old and honorable word, indeed. Read my poem Story Teller, for another take on knickers, but in mine they are called 'bloomers'. Enjoy! A Scots-Irish and Native American Redhead, Val

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Original Unknown Girl 04 August 2008

LOL! Oh I do love the naughty Donall! ! ! Such fun! HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 01 August 2008

Although not being a metaphor - simply 'a clean pair of knickers' it is used in a lovely poetical manner here :)

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Flora Gillingham 29 July 2008

The eternal dilemma. But, of course, there is an alternative solution.... Fx

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Nik Morgan 29 July 2008

Funny and true, when love comes calling you must be ready, nice work Ivor

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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