Friday, October 20, 2017

Clean Break Comments

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So this is how you want it, there is how things need to be
You want to run from memories but that's not fine with me
You love to play the victim and you justify your cause
So everyone around your sits and points out all my flaws
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Brian Hanshaw
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Sister Frances 20 October 2017

What famous last words..remember you where the one to leave me... Then you hope to yourself they're in as much pain as you are. Great poem can I use it.lol

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Todd Giberson 20 October 2017

Possible typo: on the fourth line do you mean 'you' rather than 'your'? Nice poem.

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