Thursday, August 6, 2009

Clean Comments

Rating: 5.0

we say it almost everyday
when we get out of a shower,
or wash our hands
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dani fries
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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

yeah! this was a nice poem young one...

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Romeo Della Valle 09 August 2009

You got your message across clearly, nice wording, keep it up...

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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2009

Only right thought results in right deed...you have aptly versified to have a clean mouth of right thoughts...great

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

clean your soul, clean your words...rightly said..good

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